Sunday, September 25, 2016

Doom Strikes At Reed Richards Again ... For the First Time!

Reed Richards gives Sue an odd look. He seems almost … sad.

Then he faces Doom squarely and says,
“There, you see, Victor? Sue knows who has always been the better man.”

THWA-KOOM! Doom causes the miniature atomic reactor in palm of one of his gauntlets to EXPLODE, venting a trail of poison flame and atomic steam which explodes against Sue’s force field and curves into a rainbow shape.

“A force field! Very well,” says Doom, and steps to the right. He fetches up against the invisible wall.

Then he points the index finger of his other glove at Reed Richards, and a beam of green light snaps into being! As the force field is invisible, it is therefore permeable by light, and this light is of an intensity to cut steel!

“Arrgh! The .. pain …” says Reed, and falls in a heap at John Jameson’s feet.

“That TEARS it!” says Jameson, and makes to leap at Doom. But instead, John Jameson falls full-length, held by the ankle by Reed Richards himself!

Or is it? For Reed’s blue uniform is tearing at the seams, bursting asunder as masses of purple striated muscle form on Reed’s bony frame! His hair falls aside in a shower of graying brown as the mighty brain of Mr. Fantastic swells within its inflating cocoon of bone, while the now mighty-muscled purple bald creature who once was Reed Richards lifts John Jameson upside down by one All-American ankle!

“As I suspected!” Doom crows. “You are not the Reed Richards with whom I have contended over so many years, but the imitation impostor Reed Richards from this mocked-up mockery of an Earth! The Reed Richards whose spacecraft exploded in his face, killing his friend Grimm and the Storms, and transforming the smug Mr. Fantastic into the monster men call … the BRUTE!”

“You bet!” agrees the Brute. “And I knew you’d zap puny Richards and let me out! But now, before the same thing happens here, lemme take advantage of the Man-Beast’s momentary weakness …”


And the Brute’s iron-hard purple fingers dig into John Jameson’s brow, pulling the orange Soul Stone into view without, somehow, leaving all sorts of horrific injuries.

2 comments:

  1. INVISIBLE GIRL

    This is so sad! Sue figured out it must be the Brute all of one second after she made her speech.

    The moment Reed gives her a sad look, it was obvious who it was. Because the real Reed would never look at her that way, and this IS counter earth, after all: The Brute did not need to move through space to get here, because he lives here.

    She steps very quietly to a spot where the Brute is between her and Doom, so that if Doom shoot at her, the poor Reed of counterearth gets hit first.

    Sue concentrates as she has never concentrated before and puts a small bubble of force right in the middle of the Brute's mighty palm!

    She expands this bubble was quickly as she can, trying to catch him by surprise and force his fingers apart the barest fraction of an inch needed to slip a forcefield under his fingertips and around the orange stone.

    To help the Brute loose his concentration, she takes out her compact (which she always carries with her in her belt. It is made of unstable molecules. Also a lipstick.) and blows compact powder through a forcefield straw leading up the nose of the Brute.

    Hopefully he will sneeze and let go of the gem.

    If she manages to get a force-field around the orange stone, she turns it invisible, and yanks it in a random upward direction.

    Heck, she turns it invisible anyway, no matter what else happens. It might confuse somebody.

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